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Silver Lining (Dedicated to Passions Poets In Need Of A Hug)
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Silver Lining (Dedicated to Passions Poets In Need Of A Hug) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"This is dedicated to all the special friends of Passions who need a special hug of compassion" Silver Lining By: Noah Eaton 7/27/02 Sweet one, look up to the sky and find that silver lining Stitched under the storm clouds where you hide Make a halo with it in your fingertips Make a tiara to wear upon your head Hire the blacksmith with no face to hammer it to shape Sweet child, you're always in good hands And we all will rise only stronger than we were before We all walk in a single-line baptized by grace once more Fear not, sweet child The light is ever so elusive Hanging like a hammock in the morning view Breaking apart like a million doves The light has diamond eyes that never slumber Walk upon your widows walk, touch a rainbow Befriend this blanket of tranquility outside your patio Dangle them from your fingers like shirts on clotheslines Coddle the light gently like pigeon peas in the summer breeze The things you buy and break don't matter anymore It is all what you believe and create that's sweet And we all will rise only stronger than we were before We all walk in a single-line baptized by grace once more Fear not, sweet child The light is ever so elusive Hanging like a hammock in the morning view Breaking apart like a million doves The light has diamond eyes that never slumber Look at your reflection in the mirror You swear that child deep inside of you is long-gone Look deep into your own eyes Take yourself by suprise and reconsider Amen, the spirit of innocence is all inside of you You were the giver, now pass it on and be the sender And we all will rise only stronger than we were before We all walk in a single-line baptized by grace once more Fear not, sweet child The light is ever so elusive Hanging like a hammock in the morning view Breaking apart like a million doves The light has diamond eyes that never slumber Never slumber... Never slumber... "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-30-2002 01:05 PM).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Noah this is sweet, it cheered me up even tho i'm happy thanx  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thank you Noah. This one has so many lines of rare beauty. You do this well. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Awwwwww!! reading your words made me feel a thousand times better right now You most definately have a sweet spirit and soul!!Kristen |
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Singing Sparrow Member
since 2002-05-12
Posts 94 |
thanks this made me feel better! SS |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This made me feel much better Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - a hug of compassion is always welcome. I can see compassion in your words... BC |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
you are such a sweetheart Noah... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, Has anyone ever told you, YOU are a silver lining? I wish nothing but love and happiness always for your kind heart. Love Annie ever deep...runs |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Noah love, I don't need a hug but getting one just because is so sweet. You are such a love and a silver lining for all of us. Hugs back to you, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i can always use a hug...i love touch...helen |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Sweetie..... I need all the hugs I can get right now.  ~ and hugs back at ya!Lyra |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Noah! Thank you so very much! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Oh Noah, this is so lovely. You are such a sweet person. Thanks for the hugs. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A nice and giving notion. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I'm not ashamed to admit I am a "hug junkie". paladin |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah, There is no doubt in my mind you have a heart of gold.  Juanita |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
That's so very touching-- wonderfull!  I use always a kiss. Muys |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Noah you are the sweetest guy I know... (after my son ofcourse) Thank you for this loving gesture! :kissing: Neeraja |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
oops.... Neeraja |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
 Nicely done, Noah!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hugs coming your way also, Noah! A lovely write! |
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likitysplit Junior Member
since 2002-07-25
Posts 23Alabama |
When I was young my dad used to tease me be accusing my of "slumbering" in my bed. of course I didn't know what that meant but I figured it had to be something awful. He also used to tell me I had "garments". I thought that had to be some kind of disease or bugs or something. He was a very mean father. He's still very mean. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe: You give so much with all your responses... and then you give more. *S* The poem is wonderful... but what is truly great is your heart. *S* |
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