navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » Seeing You
Open Poetry #21
Post A Reply Post New Topic Seeing You Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-07-27 08:06 PM


“SEEING YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
While you were standing
there on the walking
bridge your mirror
image reflected on the
surface of the pond…

It was caressed by
reflections of the
sky, the clouds,
and trees flowing
with the soft breeze,
as you stood there…

I could only stare, and
seeing you like this
inspired me to write
a poem about, and
only for you…

I wanted to write and
describe your beauty
which I see with my
eyes, and how your
being rhymes
with your spirit…
~~~~


© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-07-27 08:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I know just how you feel because I always want to show Joanna exactly how mch she means to me and I always write love poems for her to reveal it to her! (big hugggssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
2 posted 2002-07-27 08:27 PM


enjoyed
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-27 08:58 PM


Very very nicely penned Bill.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
4 posted 2002-07-27 10:31 PM


Awwww Bill! This is so sweet.
N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962
NC,USA
5 posted 2002-07-27 11:35 PM


Bill,
  Sounds like love to me.Very nice!

Juanita
"Live,Love and Laugh"

Samantha G Kennedy
Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 131
Kent England
6 posted 2002-07-28 06:47 AM


this sings softly ~ a great release of the minds eye....awesome

Sammie

^i^

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
7 posted 2002-07-28 08:59 PM


I wanted to write and
describe your beauty
which I see with my
eyes, and how your
being rhymes
with your spirit…

I love the concept of beauty rhyming with spirit, Bill...
an excellent write.
~ hugs of rhyme and spirit

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
8 posted 2002-07-28 09:10 PM


What wonderful imagery here. Enjoyed. ThisDiamond
devina
Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
9 posted 2002-07-28 09:29 PM


Very pretty thoughts sir!! hope you shared it with the intended??

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
10 posted 2002-07-29 04:40 PM


hey BC. . . it's amazing what seeing will inspire. . .eh, my friend???

wonderfully done. . .

-----------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

mycafe
Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584

11 posted 2002-07-29 09:58 PM


and how your
being rhymes
with your spirit…

lovely, lovely!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
12 posted 2002-07-29 10:02 PM


this is beautiful...just beautiful...helen
the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
13 posted 2002-07-29 10:11 PM


Very, very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
14 posted 2002-07-29 10:19 PM


BC....very light and extremely nicely done.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » Seeing You

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary