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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I've heard so many Harsh words in my time Sent a few too It's nice to have another Send a different view Someone thinking of me Sending kind words Could rekindle a hope In Gods love and loveing me How wonderful life would be If life could be poetry With happy endings And constant romance People always willing To give others a fair chance Moon light and stars To guide our way Candle light shadows For our body games If only we took the time To live poetry and rhyme |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Zinsser - great upbeat write. Poetry has a way of cleansing, as I've found... BC |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, yes...keep reading, and you will be purged [as long as you write more, too...] |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I like this! Unique outlook. A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Good write. All of life is poetry. We misunderstand the dark spots sometimes. Brightest lights always. ThisDiamond |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep a better a world but like the way you summed it up  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ 'How wonderful life would be If life could be poetry' Oh, but it IS sweet lady~ Every poetic thought that I maintain is drawn from the life-well within me~ This is a wistful write ... beautifully done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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