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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-27 03:36 PM



Black sorrow shadowed the mirror
Breathing of lost sublime
Angle tears sing of a heartache
Falling in three-quarter time


A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2002-07-27 04:15 PM


tears are
the saddest melody
that a heart
can make
a heart so full
and empty
how much
can we take
layers of
love stacked
so high until
we break
where tears flow
in release
to get us through
the ache

devina
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Cali
2 posted 2002-07-27 04:16 PM


Beautiful Kris...(the poem too) grins...


hugs you!!
Tanya

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Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-07-27 04:17 PM


Wow!!!!
You are so excellent at these short ones, Kris...
You manage to cram a lot of wisdom into such a few words....
Wonderfully written also.
~ chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-07-27 04:24 PM


Very strong write, Kris.
Sandra

Krishankins
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5 posted 2002-07-27 04:39 PM


Thanks everyone. As you can see, I didn't have a very easy time leaving my little one. I never do. Your words make it a lot easier to deal with, though. Hugs 2 U all!!!!!!!

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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6 posted 2002-07-27 05:31 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your missing Josie, I know how it must feel but I know with all my heart she will be back again and again and she will always love you as you will always be her angel! (sigh) This is sadly touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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