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If I Could Not
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If I Could Not |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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If I Could Not I could cover you in cotton place around yards of silk touch you in gentle kindness and give you the fill of its milk I could move you a mountain starting with a grain of sand but it would all be worthless if I could not hold your hand |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Helen....I do believe this poem very aptly says how it really is....We can do all things if only.... Nicely done... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful.... i hope all your dreams come true your worth them all and more ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is so beautifully said and so full of caring emotion - loved it Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yes, yes, and may you always hold loves hand and see all of this come true for you, sweet friend, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
One touch is worth more than any words ever spoken. How did I miss this masterpiece? I'm bumping it. A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - sweet is the pen of your thoughts... BC |
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