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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-27 04:46 AM

Serenade Me

did you know
you’re the melody
of my night
millions of stars
sing within
that light
every single one
that I see
was sent there
to serenade me

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-27-2002 03:01 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-27 06:07 AM

Short, sweet, simple,
a

to roll over
in my mind, again and again

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-07-27 03:44 PM

AAAAAHHHH!!!
Sweet words from the sweet lady!
NICE ONE Helen!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2002-07-27 03:53 PM

In all the stars of all the universes let your poems create the music in such gravity that we share your thirst for verse. Your visions have the power to create great thoughts.

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-27 04:10 PM

Helen - more wonderful words from a very gifted poet - thanks Paul

Tea Lady
Junior Member

since 2002-07-11

Posts 26

5 posted 2002-07-27 04:24 PM

1SlickLady, you write love beautifully. It does color our world magically. With a minimum of words and wonderful expression, you capture this stunningly.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-27 05:36 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the stars always serenade you straight from the eyes of your love, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noa Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-07-27 07:23 PM

helen - I've written a song that would go well with this, to serenade...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-07-27 11:24 PM

Helen...imagine just lying on a smooth soft
lawn....far away from all the lights....
seeing all those stars sitting up there..
shining down on you....serenading....

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

9 posted 2002-07-27 11:28 PM

Short and sweet.Loved it!

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

10 posted 2002-07-28 01:27 AM

kwel neatly expressed

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

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