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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-07-26 11:28 AM



Thank You
(for my Dad)


Laying under a tree
Clear vision
As far as the eye can see
Thinking of
Love always shown and given me

Sitting next to a brook
Pondering
Twists and turns in life I took
Thanking You
For casting not one shame full look

Walking on the sandy shore
Listening
Constant crashing constant roar
Powerful
Life's example you taught and wore



© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2002-07-26 11:36 AM


Zinsser

Liked the way you laced nature into your thoughts of life and your dad.  A beautiful tribute!

Zinsser
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2 posted 2002-07-27 10:47 AM


Thank You Martie.....  : )
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3 posted 2002-07-27 11:01 PM


Connie...

I really like this....

You obviously are very grateful for having
your father and the values and support he
has given you...

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4 posted 2002-07-28 09:28 AM



Quiet moments
well taught...

thank you Connie...

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