To Cast The Skipping Stone ( Upon The Stillness Of Glass)

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Open Poetry #21

To Cast The Skipping Stone ( Upon The Stillness Of Glass)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2002-07-25 11:55 PM

Upon the stilness of glass
unburden, unwilled
stone's shadows
quietly pass
above the water
silled

Hauling through the empty air
a moment to live
under such
gravity's stare
what is there
to give

Braving the faces of Fate
losing momentum
the reaction
can not wait
as the stone
skips from

Upon the stillness
of glass
stone's shadows
never last

create an addiction .... share a smile!!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-07-25 11:56 PM

I feel the sadness in this piece

Cold hands means a warm heart

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

2 posted 2002-07-26 01:04 AM

Very Beautiful...enjoyed very much.

DeaDiAmore

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2002-07-26 09:18 AM

Upon the stillness
of glass"

so soft and gentle this falls upon the stillness of hearts.....

peace you...hugsssss

Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

4 posted 2002-07-26 09:24 AM

I can see the mirrored surface of a mountain lake shattered by the ripples of a skipping stone.Good imagrery.

paladin

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-26 11:00 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, this is so very emotionally powerful, sweet friend, the vision of a rock crashing the ice also felt sad to me like a lost memory! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-07-31 02:57 PM

CTOwen~
I really was drawn by 'To Cast The Skipping Stone' ....
created instant imagery in my youthful mind's eye~

Wonderfully done~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2002-07-31 03:17 PM

Nice work, Craig. Looks like our combo poem has disappeared

This has great imagery.
Sandra

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