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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-25 10:18 PM


I have a heat rash on my neck
It itches like heck
This is not comfortable
I hate heat rashes
They are so
Not enjoyable

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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Canada
1 posted 2002-07-25 10:22 PM


I prefer getting sunburnt - on me, it turns to a suntan in a couple of hours.

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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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Texas, USA
2 posted 2002-07-27 12:54 PM


Heat rash is a bad thing, and sometimes you think it will never go away.

Nan(Pilgrim variety)

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-07-27 11:07 PM


Short,  cute....but NOT FUN!!!!!

Baby Powder.....

sodpossom
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since 2001-06-15
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N.C
4 posted 2002-07-27 11:22 PM


I feel the same way about poison ivy.Both are itchy subjects.
Madame Chipmunk
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Michigan
5 posted 2002-07-28 07:02 PM


Not fun, Julie...but I sincerely hope that this is the worst thing that ever happens to you...
~ itchy hugs

Lyra

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6 posted 2003-03-14 01:27 PM


It's so great that you can write about things so simple like this.  Hope your heat rash is better.
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