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devina
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0 posted 2002-07-25 09:17 PM


servant to your tune

~Hazy halo~
Goddess moon,
I am but servant
to your tune…
Through the summer
(stifling heat)
you are my savior
oh cooling feat-
Suggest a path
that I might render
suffice it bold~
I’m still quite tender…

Tender upon reigns
of you~
swelling in stoic
substitute~
Deem me worthy
of chills embrace,
Grant me beauty
in heart-sake’s place,
Fill my wander
with lust of life,
Spill my lonely
with seductive tryst,
Under candescence
~oh Goddess moon~
I am but servant
to your tune…

*as she circles beneath endlessly*



Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (07-25-2002 09:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-07-25 09:24 PM


Devina....I swear you could make an
encantation of this....such a seductive
write..so sensual...

devina
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2 posted 2002-07-25 09:32 PM


Barry- how do you know I have *not* ??? ~wink~ thankx cutie...as always you are ever sweet!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



BrandeeM
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3 posted 2002-07-25 11:32 PM


would love to join this circle Tanya...

I'll bet you have quite a bit of fun!!

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-25 11:32 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-07-25 11:34 PM


WOW!  Wonderfully sensual write!
Enjoyed so much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2002-07-25 11:36 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-07-25 11:37 PM


good stuff
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