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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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4 June 02 No beginning No middle Lost on how To find the end Stuck within The torn pages Of my soul Wondering how did This journey truly begin Tears become my companion Fears at the helm My trembling hands Can barely Grasp onto the map before me In dire need Of a guiding light Perhaps a tiny sliver of hope My heart is at its ends rope I never meant For any of this confusion To take control Nor this anger To surface Each time I look into your eyes My words stumble and fall Into a twisting void All I ever Wanted was a friendship But all that Was thrown out the window When I tasted The posioned apple Mingled within your kiss We should never Have flirted With our fleeting fancies Nor should we have Said the things that were said So how Do we start all over again When unsure Of where to truly begin... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-25-2002 09:15 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ceinwyn - very telling write about something lost. I believe the beginning is always there somewhere. One must look and it will find you...Best to you... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow! This has a ton of feelings...and believe this...it does not suck!..... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Been through this before...and? my own experience drew me to the conclusion that it all happens for a reason...maybe you weren't meant to be friends or lovers? just my own episode... enjoyed this heartfelt piece!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh kristen, this sounds so sad and bewildering, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright as I wish the greatest happiness for you! (sigh) This does not suck at all, for the best poems are always those that are honest and rich in heart and you possess such that quality! I wish for you to peacefully begin again with a new loves hope, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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