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Saunni
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0 posted 2002-07-25 06:46 PM


For my daughter Sami...

    


After The Summer's Gone

We were one with each other for a short season
For a while we breathed everything these hills held for us
Inside it all were moments the night saved for safe keeping
Oh, if only these evergreens could talk...

Among the grasses our feet graced the fields in spread
Our laughter lies in those lillies standing tall
We embraced every bit of what summer had to offer
And, found a families rhythm out there in it all...

I'm here to watch all that just whither away
Alone and after the summer is gone
Greens to browns as the next chill will erase all we made
And, I will only have the fall leaves to rely on...

In their break to freedom as the winds release them
Will lie my proof all over this ground
Dull like colors to prepare me for a long winters cry
And, once again, I will witness summer drown...

If only those roses could hold onto what they viewed
As they watched me out there loving you
I ache that my walk through falls early light
Will find our voices still heard there in the night...

I'm about to hear falls lonely song
About to lose heart once the summer's gone
I need a little of her so I don't lose me
So, God, can you lend me lillies through the leaves?...



Sauni The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

[This message has been edited by Saunni (07-25-2002 06:53 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-25 06:46 PM


I like this a lot

Cold hands means a warm heart

Saunni
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2 posted 2002-07-25 07:00 PM


the_loner_23, thanks for reading and responding.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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3 posted 2002-07-25 11:45 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Saunni, this is so very sad, sweet freind, my heart goe sout to you and I know how much you love your daughter but I know with allo my heart if you love her with all your heart you are bound to see each other again so much more and she will always give you lilies of happy times to share! (BIG HUGGGGGSSSSSS) Your love together will always go on, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2002-07-26 10:30 AM


Sounds of a Summer well spent ....
   sad that it must end but the seasons mend

Here's to a short winter's cry ....
   and keep an eye out for those lillies!  

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