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PoetryIsLife
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0 posted 2002-07-25 02:55 PM


Love may bite the dust,
we all may get burned,
but when we try
oh but once more, then,
Love's Disractions
are apt to play.
To distract during
that all important meeting.
To banter away
one's night sleep.
Love's Distractions
are here to stay.
Have you found
your one true match?
Or does your heart deceive?
Their face flutters
before your eyes;
all you want to do
is gently stroke the beauty.
What to do?
What to do?
Work to be done,
a live you must live;
but once more
you, my friend, are caught
daydreaming about
that one being in your grasp.
Love's Distractions
they can, and they will
disturb at any moment.
You know you love it:
The heart's little flip-flops,
the hope in your eyes,
that bounce in your step.
Much to do! you say.
But... that sweet, sweet face.
Yes, Love's Distractions.
LOVE'S DISTRACTIONS.

© Copyright 2002 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-25 03:00 PM


How all too farmiliar! I love this!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2002-07-25 03:12 PM


Awesome

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2002-07-25 07:15 PM


Cursed Love's Distractions...Ohh I'm soo feeling this one Titus!!!

Love,
Moi

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4 posted 2002-07-25 09:56 PM


It's great Ti, it really is. Gotta love those distractions Anywho...

"To distract during
that all important meeting."
*nods vigourisly* Indeed it does, indeed it does.

"To banter away
one's night sleep."
  Uh, I'll talk to you about this line lata, dude.

"Have you found
your one true match?"
  *snorts in a fit of rudeness* Shh! Don't say that! I'd talk to you later about this one too, but... *shrugs* maybe

Anyway, I really did enjoy this; all five times I read it *grins* Talk to you later.


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5 posted 2002-07-25 10:09 PM


PoetryIsLife - this sure tells it like it is...

BC

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6 posted 2002-07-25 11:32 PM




(smiles) Oh Daniel, this is wonderful, sweet friend, ooohhhhhhh...you couldn't have said it any better because all this summer not one day goes by without me dreaming of my Joanna! (big hugggsssssss) May loves sweet smile always fill you with confidence, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-07-25 11:34 PM


Words of truth.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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