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shadowchild458
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since 2002-07-10
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0 posted 2002-07-25 10:36 AM


Where shall we go?

where shall we go
my friend?
when nowhere has disapeared
and somewhere just feels like
a nightmare
where shall we go
my enemy?
when the world is filled
and heaven just isn't right
for fighting in
where shall we go
my sister?
when our home is too far away
and if we stay here it'll be hell
for all of us
where shall we go
my love?
when the love suites checked out
and the other rooms all just seem
so filthy, dirty
where shall we go
my death?
when hell is filled up to the max
and heaven we were never meant
to be in
where shall we go
my shadow?
when the sidewalks aren't paved
and the sun just won't show
you'll disapear
where shall we go
my hope?
i'm still trying to find you
when you vanished in the world
where shall i go?

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-07-25 12:10 PM


I have to wonder, where would we be--without that spark of desire for something else...

grin.

(Perhaps it's time for me to find out. )

I loved the unfolding of this, all layered, not exactly side by side but deeper...

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