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The Wooden Rose
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The Wooden Rose |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
The Wooden Rose It sits in front of my work desk facin' me everyday with the support of its fine w o o d e n stem... you have no idea how captivated I still am by the exquisite beauty of this pot of undying rose A metaphor of an enduring you&me What you see is what you get. This wooden rose you see (and sitting in front of me now) was given to me by my best friend when I first started work. Since then, it had been travelling (work)places with me. ~marie@mycafe [This message has been edited by mycafe (07-25-2002 07:02 AM).] |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
very nicely done and clever!  a very pleasant poem!  :cool:Poetry is: |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
What a nice presentation of your thoughts and the undying love in full bloom. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
isnt' it wild the way love is, just the simple things keep comeing true, Kindly, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How very clever and cool!! Wonderful creative presentation. From one gift..comes another. well done poetess  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyCafe~ Absolutely BEAUTIFUL~ I LOVE IT ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
mycafe Wonderful what you can do if you have a strong stem and just the right water. Lovely presentation! |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Ditto and ditto and ditto again. I agree with what everyone said. The poem is great, the theme is great, and the presentation is delightful :-) |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Beautiful.A rose by any other name is still a rose. paladin |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
How cute! I still can't design a poem by shape. Must take lots of patience. You did an excellent job! Deb |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mycafe, what a wonderful poem about an everlasting gift... thank you for sharing this with all of us! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! I like the way you did this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
mycafe Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Mycafe, this was great the way you were able to do this. I just love it. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I am so happy for you and may this wooden rose always symbolize the eternal friendship and happiness of love you share! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marie! THIS is fantastic! I love the piece and the presentation. ~Hugs~ |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Very nice! I loved the creative way you chose to display this piece! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Dear wonderful poetic frens, thank you so much for great words of encouragement. I'm really happy that you've enjoyed this wooden rose. Lotsa love and hugs. marie Keep counting your blessings |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so sweet, Marie... I love it that you actually drew the wooden rose into the poem.... thats something I can never seem to do, no matter how hard I try. Shape poems are just beyond me... You have done a beautiful job with this one.  ~ decafe chipmunk hugsLyra |
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