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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside

0 posted 2002-07-25 12:14 PM


The power that magistrates
loose leafed in a spiral
lost letters engraved in my heart
a match made in heaven
set aside by it self
outside of a dream state of mind.

A love in the making
giving and taking
cross examining the state of affairs
principles non paralleled
tempered concisely,
a strange magic floating on air.

Fitting in pieces
between now and then
abides by the customs
formally recognized
the laws written free of their will.

A place out of time
that I can call mine
binding together
my aching subdued
turning to bend as we mend~


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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-25 12:16 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-07-25 12:27 PM


Fitting in pieces
between now and then
abides by the customs
formally recognized
the laws written free of their will.

An excellent piece, Lori...
~ lawful hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2002-07-25 01:49 AM


Loner~ I appreciate the thumbs up!  
Thanks~

Lyra~ I'm coming out, (again)     
Thanks for being so sweet.
Hugging you~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2002-07-25 06:12 AM


ms bluezy..........

must be california? state of affairs?  (grin)


cool write babe, enjoyed the cosmo tour of lady thoughts...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2002-07-25 06:43 AM


A love in the making
giving and taking
cross examining the state of affairs
principles non paralleled
tempered concisely,
a strange magic floating on air.


very cool writing Lori.  Giving and taking,
it's all good, and what it's all about.
well done Bluesy one...*s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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