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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-24 11:52 PM



For a very special person. You know who you are.




Tear-dented whispers still ripple
Immersed in a frenzied dream
With their dew-covered feathery touch
They brush me with love from a queen


A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-25 12:00 PM


This is sweet. Whoever it is will love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-25 10:55 AM


Beautiful...lucky lucky lady!
~hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2002-07-25 02:45 PM


*sigh* Love it! Love it! A perfect piece, Kris.

Sincerely,
Titus

"They say that a hero can save us. I'm not gonna stand here and wait..."

                  -Chad Kroger

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4 posted 2002-07-25 02:53 PM



Yes, indeed, that very special person
shall know...because we will all keep
this at the top until she sees it...

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2002-07-25 05:46 PM


you change gauze to linen
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2002-07-25 09:45 PM


Krishankins - excellent short write with depth of meaning...

BC

Suetang
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7 posted 2002-07-25 10:09 PM


Simply stunning Kris.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

ThunderMage
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8 posted 2002-07-25 10:26 PM


Have to agree. This is definitely good.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

devina
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9 posted 2002-07-25 11:05 PM


G's Kris...always the last to know I guess...

but *sighs* to you on this one...

very purdy...

take care sweetie!!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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10 posted 2002-07-26 12:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, and I know that special somebody is going to swoon and sigh when she reads this, sweet friend, may the queen of your heart always share true joy of life with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

wranx
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11 posted 2002-07-26 12:23 PM


Stellar, Kris. Really!

~wranx

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is sometimes, intolerable.      

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12 posted 2002-07-26 12:48 PM


Beautiful...I enjoyed ...very much.

DeaDiAmore

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