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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-07-24 03:10 PM


I Have Waited All This Time

A love so true I gave to you
To hold inside within your heart
For my love for you never dies
From you my love will never part

It is as true as one can give
To have and hold forever more
My heart will always belong to you
Even though I may close the door

When we first met many years ago
Inside my heart I was so sure
It was a love I thought would last
A love that was so true and pure

There were many times I'd give up
Not knowing what else I could do
To make things right for us again
I did not want us to be through

To live on my own once again
I know is something I can do
Because I did for many years
A long time before I met you

To go through all we have gone through
I have never stopped loving you
Instead I have waited all this time
For you to love me again too

By Sue 7-24-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-24 05:48 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
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Maidstone Kent England
2 posted 2002-07-24 07:47 PM


Sue darling girl this is wonderful writing, so smooth and flows down the page beautifully. Wonderful work darling girl simply wonderful

I love the way you’ve written this, excellent writing darling girl

Friendly hugs and heart warming throughts.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-24 07:50 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Sue, this is a little sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I understand how painful it must had been for you to wait so long but I hope now you have all your heart deserves! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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4 posted 2002-07-24 09:09 PM


A very beautiful write, Sue.  Take care *hugs*

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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