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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-24 01:42 PM




I watch the darkness

coming in

as the day

turns into night...


The wind grows cold

and takes away

the smile I carry

from dawn to dusk...

while I cry my tears

at night...



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-24 01:57 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

sodpossom
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2 posted 2002-07-24 02:33 PM


Short and sad.Nicely done!
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3 posted 2002-07-24 03:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope everything is alright for we all understand how you feel! (sad sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2002-07-24 09:05 PM


Neeraja,

Sad your thoughts, but the light will shine once again...

BC

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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5 posted 2002-07-25 03:36 PM


It is such a comfort... to read all the sweet comments on my poems... I appreciate it a lot!!!  Thank you so much!!!



Neeraja


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