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vandana
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0 posted 2002-07-24 10:31 AM


Lean on me
Come to me
I need your shoulders
Tonight
So I can lean on you
Because I need you
to lean on you
Iam so lonely tonight
needed someone to love me
and share love with me
Lean on you
I need to lean on you
lean on you
I need someone like you
to lean on
Lean on you

© Copyright 2002 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-07-24 10:37 AM


Mutual, PLP's what a cool idea. Now I have the song going through my head, thanks.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



sodpossom
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2 posted 2002-07-24 11:21 AM


We all need someone to lean on.Very lovely write!
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2002-07-24 09:40 PM


vandana,

At times we need someone to lean on. Hope you found that special one...

BC

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-07-24 09:42 PM


I enjoyed this very much, Vandana...
mutual crying shoulders...a great idea
~ leaning on hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

powerofthysword
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5 posted 2002-07-24 09:44 PM


Wow, you write with such passion and exuberance, I am impressed.

Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2002-07-24 10:59 PM


Yep, I think we all have days like this…where we just need a shoulder to lean on…or cry on.

You can never win or lose
If you don't
Run the race

Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way

Daniel J D
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7 posted 2002-07-24 11:25 PM


You can lean on me anytime, beautiful words.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

N orth Carolina Girl
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8 posted 2002-07-25 09:29 PM


Vandana,
This a perfect song!

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-07-25 09:39 PM


VanDana~
Lovely dear~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2002-07-25 11:29 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always have that special someone to lean on and share all your feelings with, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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11 posted 2002-07-25 11:29 PM


This is sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThunderMage
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12 posted 2002-07-25 11:31 PM


Just like you Julie. But you're right about it.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
13 posted 2002-07-25 11:31 PM


Wonderful write...much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

suthern
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14 posted 2002-07-26 12:10 PM


I like this very much, vandana. *S*
Magnus
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15 posted 2002-07-26 02:07 PM


To coin a Vandana word.....

ENJOYED!

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