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Open Poetry #21

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-24 08:35 AM

Teacher

then teach me
my colors pale
in darken pause
and wing to night
upon the back
of darken prince
fly to day
awaken haste
free my soul
once more
tasted the feel
of silken gloom
I’ve dressed
in it before
but to breathe
its air
and touch
its lips
I’m naked
in its grasp
and if thy name
be prince or pauper
your silk
is still my wrap

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-24-2002 08:41 AM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2002-07-24 10:02 AM

mmmm yes

ms slick you did this one grand

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

2 posted 2002-07-24 10:04 AM

Very Nice :-)

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-07-24 09:45 PM

Hi slick,

Again another well of verse...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-07-24 10:02 PM

'...free my soul
once more
tasted the feel
of silken gloom
I’ve dressed
in it before...'

Been there and it's not fun. This was really good and I enjoyed it so much.
Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-07-24 10:30 PM

Smoooothe! I LOVE reading you!! This is what I miss the most!

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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