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ambermize
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-07-22 11:37 PM

Invisible tears, held in palm,
You kiss them all away,
Unwritten love songs, in your eyes,
Please tell me that you'll stay.

Shattered dreams, rebuilt in you,
With just one single touch,
Insecurities abroad, you wrap them tight,
I didn't mean to feel this much.

Indecisive nature, set on you,
As I watch you sleep tonight,
Perfect worries, within your grace,
Nothing should feel this right.

Tenderness in laughter, I miss you,
Plagued by never knowing,
Soft goodbyes, soon will come,
My ignorance, forever showing.

Tomorrows treasures, within my soul,
Harboring lost intuition,
Pretending for once, you will not go,
But we've both made our decision.

Speaking without talking,
Seeing without sight,
Feeling without knowing,
If I can make this right.

Trusting without promises,
Living without lies,
Losing myself inside a dream,
That has no compromise.

Falling without asking,
Loving without time,
Happiness is not a wisdom,
But a pain, once left behind.

A heart can only truly break, once it learns to love completley.

[This message has been edited by ambermize (07-22-2002 11:44 PM).]

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-23 01:03 AM

"Tomorrows treasures, within my soul,
Harboring lost intuition,
Pretending for once, you will not go,
But we've both made our decision"
that was my favorite part. it was so beautiful the way you wrote it out it just all sounds so good together. it sounds kinda like a story that could be made into some kind of disney movie ( i mean that in the best sense of course) (as in it would be worthy enough to be made into a movie

)

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

2 posted 2002-07-23 01:15 AM

I wish that I could find a way to tell you how much I liked this without sounding stupid. You said this beautifully.

Love your signature line. It all fits.

Shenachie

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2002-07-25 12:21 PM

I love this sis!!!

"Trusting without promises,
Living without lies,
Losing myself inside a dream,
That has no compromise."

EXACTLY what I expected you to find...No one said this would be easy Ambs...but you will make it work with? FAITH...don't make me come down there!!!

loved this sis
and love you!!

Tanny
Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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