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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-07-22 09:05 PM

The suns light has descended,
beyond the horizons of joy.
Twilight
where neither sun nor moon,
sheds light upon the heart.
Such is the hour of Grace,
when Faith illuminates
the dark corners of the soul.

Old lies and outworn beliefs
are seen for what they are.
Dying
their death fertilizing soil,
where new hope blossoms.
Love's
fragrance permiates life's hour.
Twilight
where Faith is the rose
of eternal light.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-22 09:07 PM

(smiles) Oh Ellie, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the beauty of faith fills your words and shines like the rose you describe! (kiss on cheek) You are a true delight to us all, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-07-22 09:08 PM

lovely poem - very well written - enjoyed it so much - thanks Paul

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2002-07-22 09:13 PM

For those that know......that moment when the heart's acceptance becomes louder and stronger than the voices of doubt in the mind, is the most beautiful and intense moment one could experience. There is no mistaking that you KNOW this enlightment as you describe it more beautifully and completely than I have ever read. Excellent write and a true blessing to read.

[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (07-22-2002 09:14 PM).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2002-07-22 09:22 PM

Sorry for the quick come back....but want to save this one for my library.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-07-22 09:24 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

6 posted 2002-07-22 09:58 PM

Mom, this is exceptional. You have written this so beautifully!! I hope this receives the attention it deserves.

Love you,

Beth

What is past is prologue;
what to come,
In yours and my discharge.

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

7 posted 2002-07-24 10:16 PM

Ellie,
This is a lovely message and comparision of the physical and the Spiritual, which I have never thjought quite like that but is seems quite appropriate. A specail message, from a Special person displaying Special insight, used to share and to bless others.

Bless You too,
david

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2002-07-24 10:20 PM

Love's
fragrance permiates life's hour.
Twilight
where Faith is the rose
of eternal light.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Your gift for writing really shines in this lovely poem.

Hugs,
Deb

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