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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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another daylight moon dawns westward uncommon wisdom knows the way the birds sing and forgets just which way the wind blows or that anything moved through the air at all beyond the hanging on a thread of sand when reflections are shattered do we have to turn away from whatever we've placed in front of our eyes as the mirror? do we turn around and face a perceived reality? do we look at the wall beyond the reflection? or, do we just close our eyes until the moon becomes the sun and stars shine in black? palm trees kiss the sky that I've created and the water falls just two feet in front of me hands raised in supplication to whatever dayety dawns in this twilight sunrise spectrum there's the song again, coming from a place I've always known perhaps this time, I'll find the harmonies when I open my eyes and see ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lovely, you..just lovely.  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Now you've made me wonder...do I??? G's John...now I must up the caffeine?! and this: or, do we just close our eyes until the moon becomes the sun and stars shine in black? um...I think I do...~sigh~ loved this my dear Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, the images in this make me sigh. Did you deliberately misspell deity? If you did it's a cool play on words. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sven, your words always mirror such wonders that can seem so opaque to us sometimes, sweet friend, this is excellent, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
bumpers..  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
loner_23, thanks. . . Temptress, thank you. . . twice. . . and yes, thank you for the words. . . Tanya, what caffeine?? and don't tell me that it's not something that you've never done before. . . besides. . . it's good for your brain to expand like this. . . makes it much more fun to play with. . .  Keth, yes, yes I did misspell "deity" on purpose. . . good catch. . . I thought that it fit better that way. . . glad that you like it. . . Noah, to mirror the opaque. . . now, there's an image. . . I'll have to play with that one for a while. . . thank you my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Excellent writing, Sven, there's much to ponder here. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - the harmonies will come and show themselves. As always my friend... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Perhaps my friend, perhaps... Well done Sir...much ponderance within... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, always much to ponder with me. . . thanks. . . BC, yes, I know that they will. . . I'm just wondering what I have to play to get them to come out. . . thanks my friend. . . Magnus, perhaps indeed Sir. . . thank you. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*sighing again at this one* You deserve these bumps, yanno? Especially this one...lots and lots in this one. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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chitsank Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 88 |
Wonderfull thoughts reflected in ur work. |
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