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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-07-22 04:27 PM


He looks at his girl
As she smiles wide and bright
She is his light
She gives him all his might

He wanted to give her flowers
Something that perfectly fits her
Then he saw the perfect flower
A sunflower

It made him think of her smile
Her bright eyes
Her wonderful laugh
How he wanted to spend
The rest of his life with her

Cold hands means a warm heart

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NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
1 posted 2002-07-22 04:51 PM


Awwww! Sunflowers are so cheery and bright!   Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain."

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-22 05:41 PM


A very bright and warm piece. FULL of promises. WONDERFUL!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-22 06:20 PM




(big hugggsssssss) oh Julie, this made me cry because it made me think of my beautiful girl Joanna reading this and her favorite flower she says is a sunflower and every time I see one I think of her smile and I love her so so much! (sigh) She's been gone for a week now so I've felt kind of sad these last few days and wonder if she's alright! This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
4 posted 2002-07-22 06:23 PM


Sunflowers are good - and cheap.
Sunny write here
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



vandana
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5 posted 2002-07-22 07:06 PM


enjoy
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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6 posted 2002-07-22 08:13 PM


Sunflowers are special...bright like the sun brought to earth to remind the garden of the bounty to come. Really enjoyed this piece.
ThisDiamond

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
7 posted 2002-07-23 04:55 AM


this speaks of soft Mother earth...wonderful and sweet!

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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