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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2002-07-22 04:20 PM


Cool night air
breathing down my back
sending shivers down my spine
heart ache and heart break
singing out the blues
watching the dews
as they appear
upon the blades of grass so green
that even in between
see the breeze
tremble through the trees
watch as the leaves
flutter to the ground like bees
create a mystery
from the garden at which you wait
drawing near that special date
laughter soaring through the trees
as the cool night breeze
makes my nose curl up in a sneeze
cool night air
breathing down my back

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-22 04:25 PM


This is awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-22 07:41 PM


Kellie~
An adorably delightful read~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2002-08-07 07:20 PM


Hi Kellie, after reading your note to Larry, I had to go look up your poems. you seem such a sweet and caring person. This is a lovely poem. I will look for more.
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-08-07 07:24 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kellie, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, I am so happy Sandra brought this back up to the top because you truly are a wonderful friend to us all and we are all here to support you during this difficult times! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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