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Open Poetry #21

A Desert Of Loneliness...

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-22 02:35 PM

I must have reached
a desert
of loneliness…

Where once I cried
a lake of tears
is now
only silence…

no waves
no colours
no sounds
nothing
but sand
born
out of dried tears...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-22 03:18 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so sad, sweet friend, I know this loneliness ever so much too but I know with all my heart that soon you will find that ocean where all your dreams will come to you! (kiss on cheek) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! you have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2002-07-23 08:24 AM

I havent had much time to be here of late,
but a "sunshiney" friend told me to keep an eye out for a new poets work...said that I would enjoy your style...she was right.
I believe you wrote a part of me in this melancholy gem of pen.
The succinctity of your words have perfect poetic impact.
a belated welcome to Poetry Land from me
I'll be watching for your name.
take care
jm

How she loves me, I dont understand
If time wont change me, perhaps she can
And I feel her trying when were apart
God dont let me break her heart

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-07-23 08:38 AM

Janet Marie... how sweet of you!!! And thanks for the nice welcome! I really like it here... and your friends words, together with yours, put a smile on my face!!!

Thank you so much!!!

Neeraja

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

4 posted 2002-07-23 09:21 AM

"but sand
born
out of dried tears... "

The expression was superb!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

[This message has been edited by mycafe (07-23-2002 09:24 AM).]

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2002-07-23 09:44 AM

Very sad but so Lovely

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