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Kethry
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0 posted 2002-07-22 08:51 AM


The moonlight glows soft on my skin
Yet I say, let the day begin
Let that deep warmth of summer sun
Bring my warm dreams of night undone
Letting the breeze so soft and low
Taking from me this night time glow
Let now the sun in gentle warm
Give me my meaning, give me form
Those dreams lie soft upon my brow
And I will say who claims me now
The knight of night has left me cold
In dreams of lust left half untold
The sun gleams bright against my skin
And I say, let the day begin

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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Toerag
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1 posted 2002-07-22 08:58 AM


Nicely done gal....(for some of us it means: Let's get ready to rumble!).....
Kethry
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2 posted 2002-07-22 09:14 AM


my tummy's rumbling...does that count?

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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3 posted 2002-07-22 09:32 AM


Keth beloved heart sister this is utterly utterly wonderful without doubt one of your best. I love this I really do

love and warm stuff
as always
Marsha

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the earthquake wind and fire

Neeraja
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4 posted 2002-07-22 02:25 PM


A beautiful poem!!!  What a start of the day!!!

Neeraja

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5 posted 2002-07-22 02:45 PM


I loved it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2002-07-22 04:36 PM


do you mind if I just borrow this???

great job Keth. . .

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7 posted 2002-07-22 05:14 PM


Kethry, this is just beautiful!
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8 posted 2002-07-22 06:27 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is delightful such happy sunshine fills your words, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-07-22 06:30 PM


More beautiful words from you Lynne.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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