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True Love's Calling (by me and Tiersdin -- we so poetic!)

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bsquirrel
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0 posted 07-21-2002 11:54 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for bsquirrel


Lie with me here,
quietly,
and explore landscapes set before you.
Let me climb the ridges of your heart.

Engulf me in your arms,
devour my fears upon your lips
I need the sunlight of your kiss,
my love.

My kiss is yours,
an endless rainbow upon your palate.
The snow of your rainy fragrance
heals my slowing touch.

Catch me as I surrender
hidden treasures of my seasons
into your beautiful hands...
Your fingers place and remove shadows.

From the treeline's hold,
your delectable sweetness fills me,
leaving me trembling
as a new leaf upon love's vine...

I taste the grapes
of your maddening love.
I drink the bitter-sweet
of your passionate tears
A draught of wine for all
we have still yet to share.

There's so much inside I have for you
that mere words cannot compare.
We explore the landscapes
of the moon we share.

Hold on my love,
we're halfway there...  

I taste the ache of your eyes again.
We feast upon our moans & our sighs again
A meal made of the taste
of our consent to defeat.

This melting of souls into one
makes us complete

I succumb to the shape of our shade,
in this landscape of our need.

Water our love, my darling,
watch us become like a firmly planted tree...

Let me sit alone
with you among your roots.
I am newly blossomed fruit,
partake of all you see...

Dropped among this landscape of you and me.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

© Copyright 2002 MPC - All Rights Reserved
Anvrill
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1 posted 07-21-2002 11:56 PM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

Didja guys do more verse for verse than line for line this time? 'Cause it seems more like that.

Awesome read.

As always.

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

bsquirrel
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2 posted 07-21-2002 11:58 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

It's more like we wrote a mad jumble of words and somehow we formed it into a poem with form and structure later on. Tiersdin can corroborate that! Heh heh.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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3 posted 07-22-2002 12:22 AM       View Profile for Tiersdin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tiersdin

Thank you, Anvril... I've read this and it's beginning to get tougher to figure out who's writing what...

Mikey, you rule!

*smiles*
~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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4 posted 07-22-2002 12:23 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Hmm ... I *guess* that could be considered corroboration. On th' moon. LOL

Always a pleasure.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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5 posted 07-22-2002 01:41 AM       View Profile for Madame Chipmunk   Email Madame Chipmunk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Madame Chipmunk's Home Page   View IP for Madame Chipmunk

I taste the grapes
of your maddening love.
I drink the bitter-sweet
of your passionate tears
A draught of wine for all
we have still yet to share.

Now that is what I call a love fest...and a picturesque poem filled with beautiful imagery...and yes you are both unbelievably fantasic poets...
~ drunken hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 07-22-2002 02:22 AM       View Profile for mycafe   Email mycafe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mycafe

So very charming! Great job !!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Anvrill
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7 posted 07-22-2002 10:06 AM       View Profile for Anvrill   Email Anvrill   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anvrill's Home Page   View IP for Anvrill

Mikey! Lyra liked th' verse you took th' time to point out to me before posting!

Cool.

Rodents rock!

written in blood before everything went black

JCV

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8 posted 07-22-2002 10:14 AM       View Profile for Krishankins   Email Krishankins   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krishankins

This is really nice, you two!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

bsquirrel
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9 posted 07-22-2002 11:49 AM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Something new -- Lori called me "Mikey."   Glad you all enjoyed.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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10 posted 07-22-2002 04:39 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

now this is good. . . I like it. . . yes, I like it a lot. . .



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11 posted 08-29-2002 06:03 PM       View Profile for bsquirrel   Email bsquirrel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bsquirrel

Thanks, Sven! (man, I'm *years* late replying to this! )

Mike
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Some interesting memories this one brings up, PS.
wranx
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14 posted 09-08-2003 02:39 AM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

And this was before my time here...Thanks PS for bobbing it into the present

Awesome this

Ed
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awsome
 
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