in memory of my brisk walk (senryu)

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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

0 posted 2002-07-21 11:51 PM

stepped on a photo,
felt pity for its owner~
sacred memories lost

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

1 posted 2002-07-21 11:54 PM

oops...it made me smile...and i bet it was not meant to,but it is very clever! I enjoyed and added you to my library..Yes fellow haiku nuts! smiles...

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

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my own state

2 posted 2002-07-21 11:57 PM

interesting thoughts come about here...like seeing families discarding old photos when relationships are long gone.take care

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

3 posted 2002-07-22 02:26 AM

A photo of discarded memories indeed, but may never be so easily forgotten as well. Interesting senryu!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-07-22 03:30 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Heng, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to who had that picture and their feelings! (sigh) This is sadly sentimental, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-07-22 03:37 PM

black & white remains
stuck to the sole of my soul
carried forever

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2002-07-22 04:30 PM

it's interesting to notice what we step on. . .

great work faterider. . .

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

7 posted 2002-07-22 04:32 PM

Great write. Sad loss.

Cold hands means a warm heart

catalinamoon

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since 2000-06-03

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The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2002-07-22 09:18 PM

Good one, enjoyed.
Sandra

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

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Ohio, USA

9 posted 2002-07-22 09:21 PM

what a wonderful ode to empathy - great poem - great show of concern - loved it - Paul

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2002-07-23 01:35 AM

thanks all for reading...i am now motivated to do a series on photos...let's hope my muse cooperates with me!

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

11 posted 2002-07-23 03:38 AM

To faterider's muse

Looking forward to
photographic memories
written in series

Shenachie

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

12 posted 2002-07-23 06:21 AM

thanks Shenachie for your encouragement! post your stuff in Open...don't just remain in the Poetry Workshop

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