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Midnight Seduction
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Midnight Seduction |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
This was written with 5 words given to me as a challenge and a few more thoughts added. It is more of a look from the woman side of a fantasy, for the words where hers. The mystery chilled the air in heat lightning The suspense in the silence of the unknown Ever so slightly he let his little manipulation unfold On a trail he stole my heart In the darkness of questions As if on queue the midnight hour chimed As our walk ended its trail In a view no fairy tale could master The shimmer of what seemed like thousands of candles Reflected within the ambrosia of my aroused feminism Under the willow tree branches Beside the river of flowing emotions An arch of flowers weaved a passageway into ecstasy Inside the walls of our kingdom’s treasures A blanket of sheer delight was spread of silken dreams With velvet laced pillows of purple passion As the leaves whisper his name The music intertwined in the melody of soft touching Creating ripples of erotic needs Ever so special for his words captured me In a weave of enchantment He arose with his unbutton shirt To retrieve a hidden treat For in a cooler hidden He came back with two chocolate malts In a symbolisms of the way of how we met Now swooning at all temperatures In the stimulus of cuddled conversation He set the fire deep within me In a slow sensual burn of hours With the four o’clock moon shining He enraptured me within a question Setting me in motion making the earth quake In the needs now being devoured As the morning light awoke in our future In exhaustion, I said I do Words: candles, weeping willow, heat lightning, chocolate malts, 4 am conversations. Did not use “job interview (a without thought)”, unless you think about it as being asked, to take on the job with the most responsibility in the world. PS. It is hard writing as a woman!! D.Lester Young (07/21/02) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh my gosh, and you write in a womans perspective so well, sweet friend, it is a very accomplshed task indeed but you have no problem feeling for their hearts here! (sigh) This is a beautifully seductive poem, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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