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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-07-20 11:32 PM


Dreaming of Penelope

In my dream I was slowly but
surely falling in love with you.
You might have filled the wants of
my dreams except for a fault or two.
I got my first warning about the time
you ran your soft fingers through my hair.
As you did this you told me you would
soon be marrying a millionaire.
Right then I already knew I didn't qualify.
But it felt so good when you melted into
my arms that I still wanted to give it a try.
That's when you told me you would be
marrying a guy named Tom Cruise.
That's when i thought to myself it would
never happen because he was already taken
so I just continued to snooze and believing
in my dream that I had nothing to lose.
We held each other real close and
kissed for an hour or so.
I kissed her top to bottom but I
really liked her toes.
A happy thought came to me.
Hey I can score this girl if
I just kiss her toes properly.
I was talking her through a
sensual game I like to play
until she abruptly stopped me
and said "No way Jose."
She said somethig about
"You snooze you lose."
This thought made me want to scream
because I suddenly realized I was stuck
about half way into a wet dream.
About then she told me her name
was Penelope Cruz.
Seems like both of us had stepped
into the wrong dream.
I was dreaming about Penelope but she
was dreaming about Tom Cruise.

JamesLee
July18
2002



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-20 11:34 PM


Cool poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-20 11:37 PM




(giggles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo amusing, sweet friend, it is amazing what can come in our dreams, this is a very unusual and beautiful fantasy, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-07-21 12:16 PM


big smiles!...very clever...I enjoyed.

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards,

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2002-07-25 04:46 AM


Thank you the_loner_23, Noah and CSKpoet for the nice reponse...James
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