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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2002-07-20 11:11 PM


Sweet Surrender

Bring me close to you.
So close I can look at you
and touch you and taste
every luscious morsel
of sweet surrender.

And I shall feel the pleasure
of her silky softness
within my tingling fingers
when my desiring heart enters
this beautiful place in which
it yearns to linger.

In this very moment I stand ready
to do anything my heart requires.
Yes I willingly yield in sweet
surrender to my new found
hearts desire.

JamesLee
July18
2002


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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2002-07-20 11:12 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-20 11:15 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you always find happiness in her heart and make the sweet surrender into smiles! (big hugggsssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-07-21 12:12 PM


Beautiful and I am Happy to see romance in your life once again James.....enjoy and tresure her.
aloha, Cher  (Koko)

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards,

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
4 posted 2002-07-21 04:43 PM


You write the most romantic poetry, James...
Very beautiful.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-07-21 06:26 PM


Dang James...this is great!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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