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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-07-20 06:48 PM


I could try to pen a love song
But no words would ever do
To tell of the deep devotion
And of the love I have for you

I feel you with me every day
Your image soothes my aching heart
As I remember with such fondess
All the love you did impart

So much love I have for you
'tho you're many miles away
I hold on tightly to my memories
Inside my heart they're locked away

I'll light a candle to our love
And keep the fire burning bright
Thoughts of you will come to me
As the day turns into night

* * * *

I dedicate this to my father who still
remains my guiding light.


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (07-20-2002 06:55 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-20 07:04 PM


This is the sweetest tribute.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-20 07:26 PM




(smiles) And he will always be your guiding light, for nothing can ever change the deep love you share together! (big hugggssssss) This is beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

sigheyes
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3 posted 2002-07-20 07:35 PM


Very sweet words of endearment Sue.  Thank you.
Goodknight
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4 posted 2002-07-20 07:55 PM


A wonderful poem - a wonderful tribute - I enjoyed the read very much - Paul
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5 posted 2002-07-20 08:13 PM


A really special bond must exist between you & your father. This is so Great... Paul
Suetang
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6 posted 2002-07-20 11:54 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments.  When my father died I felt a part of me went with him, 'tho the love I hold dearly for him comforts me, especially on the days I'm feeling down.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2002-07-21 01:51 PM


Sue:  A beautiful poem.  Your father would enjoy your work so much and who knows........just maybe he does!

Betty Lou Hebert

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