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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-07-20 05:23 PM


Tonight I am walking home alone
With a broken heart
Thinking what I did wrong
To make him leave me alone

All he could say is,
"This is just not working for me."
Then he kicked me to the curb
You see

So now I am walking home
Maybe one day the right one will come
And I will be happy again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2002-07-20 05:50 PM


If this refers to me, then I'm sorry.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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2 posted 2002-07-20 05:55 PM


Very Nice...
I'm sure the right one will come along, Just don't give up.   Paul

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3 posted 2002-07-20 05:55 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I sure hope this is fictional to you, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you if it is just as it does to many others who get hearts broken every day! (sad sigh) Tis is emotionally powerful, sweet friend, love will always find a way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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