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As The Wind
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As The Wind |
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Pegasus Junior Member
since 2002-07-14
Posts 10Oklahoma |
He is as the wind, Gentle as a touch of a feather on my face. He is as the sun, soothing, with warmth and passion, He is as the moon calming fears away in the pale light. He gently moves my spirit out among the flowers among the grasses so green and sweet, out from the dark shadows, into the warmth of the light Soaring above the mountain peaks now a bird in flight, dipping,diving and playing…. A bird, now flying free in the wind. Pegasus |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you've waited a few days to post Welcome and great first post |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
This is a very inspirational poem.Welcome to Passions.I look forward to more of your poems.Look for a special e-mail welcoming you. paladin |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem. Welcome to Passions. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Pegasus. This is a wonderful entry into a new family of poet friends. Look around, enjoy, read, write, and above all...have fun. Karilea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Beautifully done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
What is greater than " Freedom " Really liked this alot. I could picture an Eagle flying free over the mountains. I wonder if He is referring to God for He is everything. |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
A fine example of free verse: images that will evoke different interpretations according to the philosopical outlooks of its readers; effective repetitions; gentle, contemplative tone flowing from keen observation of life and living; confident style. I liked it very much, more so because it soothes the spirit when turbulent and excites the intellect when dormant. Thank you. Patrick Talty |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pegasus I enjoyed this spirit filled poem. Welcome to Passions! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Welcome - this is just beautiful. What a wonderful way to begin at Passions. I look forward to reading more from you. Hugs, Marti "Even if life is full of thorns, I still embrace it for I know that in between those thorns, there is a rose worth all the pain." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Oh... how I wish I could fly... Love this poem!!! Neeraja |
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Pegasus Junior Member
since 2002-07-14
Posts 10Oklahoma |
Thank you very much for your kind comments and especially for the hearty welcom to Passions! Pegasus |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is such a beautiful debut, sweet friend, such love and grace fill your words and truly flitter and sigh like the Pegasus of your heart, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Pegasus, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peggy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Pegasus~ Welcome~  This is just a beautiful read~ Thank you for sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions and I hope to read many more!! what a wonderful entrance you made...enjoyed it a lot Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I can see how much we will enjoy having you here already.... may you enjoy being here as much. Welcome to Passions. As to your sig...we love when writing is from the heart. Enjoyed this much. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely poem you breezed in for us. M |
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