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Magical Eyes |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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You tried to show me a rainbow I couldn't quite perceive You said "It's right there Daddy! See!" I followed your fingertip to the clouds Studying hard, gazing deep. "Where Josie? I don't see it" You just turned to me and smiled With assurance you said, "Don't worry Daddy, it will come back. I promise" We walked on, and I turned to look just one more time. I smiled, because it was there. I was walking with my little girl the other day and this incident actually happened. There was no rainbow that I could see, the first time. When I turned to look the second time, I felt like she had magical eyes, because it was there after all. A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Its amazing how small children can sometimes see what we can't. I think they do have magical eyes.  ~ magical hugsLyra |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yeah... my daughter is always pointing out the obvious to her dumb ole' dad and she's only 5 nice one Kris BS. I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nothing like a little one to see magic. Enjoyed this. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, that is so sweet, dearest friend, though I am grown up now I still believe in magic and the most beautiful incredible things and I know your daughter will grow up and always share you those rainbows and happy memories forever! (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awwww this one made me smile, to have such a promise of your little one is so pure and so full of faith...thank you for sharing this precious moment Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful! As seen through the innocent magical eyes of a child. ~Enjoyed, Hugs~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice~~~ *s M |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Awwww Kris...I miss this from you!!! You know they say children see what we adults have closed our minds to right? I know you're having a blast and all...but? drop me a line so's I know you're still alive...  take care hun Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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