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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2002-07-19 10:53 PM


I feel so far
so far
removed
from reality
of shovelfuls
of tossed earth
on shiny brass boxes
and the irony
of the finalty
of insertion
into a tunnel
of eternity
"from whence we came,
we go again"
watching
in disbelief
as they fall
like dominoes
and leaving flowers
left to die
in honor of the dead
and the mid-morning
echoed memories
of the voices
once so soothing
and the touch
I cannot feel
and I weep
and walk
the floors alone--
nobody's baby
anymore...



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Krishankins
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Senior Member
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
1 posted 2002-07-19 11:00 PM


This is SO lovely!! SAD
It struck me softly, but deeply.
It is hard to say goodbye, that's why I always say, I'll see ya later!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-19 11:00 PM


I love your poems. They rock!!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

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