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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-19 10:46 PM



I feel your tears against my heart
And wrap your body soft
Now drain your shape, become my own
Leave pain to wander off

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-19 10:48 PM


Sad yet beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-07-20 01:19 AM


+ =

Sincerely,
Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

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3 posted 2002-07-20 01:39 AM


a very good one
a 4line picturemagic
BS.

I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles

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4 posted 2002-07-20 08:59 AM



Kris, this is some exceptional imagery...
thank you...

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5 posted 2002-07-20 09:15 AM


Kris... Very good. I hope all your tears turn to tears of joy.
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6 posted 2002-07-20 02:59 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Kristopher, this is sooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, may you together always kiss each others tears away and make everything OK! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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7 posted 2002-07-20 03:04 PM


short and sweet.

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8 posted 2002-07-20 03:46 PM


love it!!!



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