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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2002-07-19 07:59 PM


Orange blossoms around lavender
Daisies among clover
Music clinging in the sweat of love
Moving inside in the rhythm and blues

Rose in perfection, your face so delicious
I can taste you in the notes in my heart
Beating beads of perspirations
That wants to merge with your womanly desires

In a fragrance of wild abandon
Creating the fires of passion
Sending the music into the heavens to storm
In thundering rolls that my words want you

In a verse, in a song claiming you
In a massage that sends sparks into the evening sky
The heat lightning creating the static for more
In a moon that sets your skin into motion

The echoes of the whispers
Set the hoot owl in me barking
Like a wolf needing to shout out the experience
Like a man so blessed the animal in him rests

In the aftermath of the cuddle of love doves
Yes, cherry blossoms around a bouquet of orchids
I have to try you next
Until every aroma of you is excited

Do not worry
For I bought a potpourri store
With candles for our studies inside
And nature power to create eternal Spring outside

But the way
I got a new line of bubble bath lotion in today
Tomorrow I look into mood music
Soon I will have you in rapture
In the wild eyes of your mascara running
Hmmmmmmm.


Thought: Love should be excitement in motion, sending nature’s call in motion. Love should be climbing mountains on a bed of daisies. Love should be the gentle whispers that say, I love you.

D.Lester Young (07/04/02)
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)


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"Orange blossoms around lavender
Daisies among clover
Music clinging in the sweat of love
Moving inside in the rhythm and blues"




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love this, sweet friend, the beginning completely painted the picture perfectly as the whole poem is passionately perfect, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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