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Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2002-07-18 08:05 PM

words rush to the rescue
feelings surge from the heart
teeth grate at the sounds of heartbreak
hearts pound with desire
ears burn from thoughtless words
palms sweat in anticipation
feet itch desiring to run
eyes water in sadness
noses run after the tears
if I didn’t go on
you would think this is bad
but here is the answer
don’t feel like you’ve been had
all these things are a part of
a lifetime with love
it doesn’t always fit like a hand in a glove

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-07-18 08:08 PM

(smiles) Oh Paul, I couldn't agree with you more, sweet friend, I still yearn to meet Joanna for the first time and I cry a lot because I love her and sometimes get scared I may lose her and she means so much to me, yet I know I'm only loving her more each day! (big hugggsssssss) This is lovely wisdom, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-07-18 08:12 PM

Noah - thanks for your read and review and for your loving wisdom - I hope so that your love find all of the completeness you yearn for!!! Paul

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-18 08:18 PM

Good write Paul and how true!
The course of true love never runs smoothly.
Keep up the great writing...
I'm so pleased you came to Passions!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2002-07-18 08:22 PM

Nancy - thanks for your very kind comments and encouragement. I bow to you wonderful Enchantress for offering me the chance to be here and to write - it is a humble bow...thanks Paul

mycafe
Senior Member

since 2002-05-23

Posts 584

5 posted 2002-07-18 08:59 PM

Hi Paul, yes agree with you. Sometimes we are put to go through some rough patches, for us to appreciate the true beauty of love, and reap the happiness it gives.

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-07-18 09:01 PM

EXACTLY!
This is wonderful. In the mood to smile and this was just the thing. ThisDiamond

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-07-18 09:02 PM

Paul

Love is such a strong force...like a hoop, we jump and sometimes fall..but the beauty of the feeling, is the reason for it all.

enjoyed!

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2002-07-18 09:14 PM

So true. You have to take the good with the bad.
Enjoyed the read.

Deb

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2002-07-18 09:21 PM

A wonderful poem, Paul...
and as with love, the true course of life never runs smooth...and just think how boring it would be if it did.

~ hugs of life

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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