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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2002-07-18 02:10 AM


I'd like to start by saying hello again to all of you that know me, i'm glad ot be back and i hope you enjoy this.

~I Forgot~

I look into your eyes
and say i love you
i hold your hand tight
because i cant stand not to
i hang on every word you say
and reach to touch your lips
but then you quickly turn away
and i start to feel like this
i forgot i couldn't touch you
i forgot we couldn't kiss
but somehow i dont forget
what its like to feel like this
i need you to to hold onto me
i need to feel your touch
i need to know you love me
because i dont hear it enough
i love you more than anything
and you have to know the truth

you could never love someone
as much as i love you


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2002 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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1 posted 2002-07-18 04:34 AM


It seems to be human nature to forget the things we need to remember, and not forget the ones that cause us pain...this is a wonderful write, my friend, and I enjoyed reading!!  

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2002-07-18 11:22 PM


thanks sunny i am glad you liked it...this one is very special to me...because he just doesn't understand me...

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2002-07-18 11:40 PM


I say that all the time..I have those same needs and don't hear it enough either

I love the way you expessed  it.
~smiles
M

the_loner_23
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4 posted 2002-07-18 11:43 PM


Great expression.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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