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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York 
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Missing from the quilt a piece with a story a mystery a fairy tale a heart a soul Missing from the quilt the stuffing and the tears torn up and raggity like a little girls favorite doll |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A puzzle still, is incomplete, until the last piece falls in place. A jig-saw scene of holding hands-- reveals the final grace. smiles to you. Enjoyed this much. I hope you don't mind the impromptu poetry--you've inspired me!  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
There was nothing 'missing' from this poem, absolutely beautiful ... 'Missing from the quilt the stuffing and the tears torn up and raggity like a little girls favorite doll' ...Wonderful words, the torn stuffing toy imagery was lovely, enjoyed this very much . Thanks, L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
 Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Missing from the quilt a piece with a story It sounds like the important piece was missing...the piece that told the story... Very vivid imagery, Kellie... Well expressed.  ~ hugs with the missing piece sewn inLyra |
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