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Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25
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Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2002-07-18 12:05 PM



I had a dream,
And watched it like a fly on the glass,
So close you could feel it's breathing,
But too far to ever grasp.

Life-- "Although most elements are taken from reality, some have been exagerated for dramatic clarity."

© Copyright 2002 Alice Lynn Wagner - All Rights Reserved
MIdsummerRain
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since 2002-05-19
Posts 175
St. Louis, Missouri
1 posted 2002-07-18 01:24 AM


Intriguing & Truly a Beautiful Thought ~Rayne

For in much wisdom is much grief
& he who increases knowledge
    increases sorrow...
                  Eccl. 1:18

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2002-07-18 03:02 AM


Wonderful analogy, and the frustration is so life like and true to form!  

Enjoyed your thoughts.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2002-07-18 04:35 AM


From one daydreamer to another:
EXCELLENT!!!


Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-18-2002 04:36 AM).]

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-18 01:38 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you continue to dream and watch them blossom and come true before your very eyes soon, sweet friend, this is lovely and enchanting, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alice, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

texasrose
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since 2001-10-24
Posts 146

5 posted 2002-07-18 01:52 PM


Beautiful
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands
6 posted 2002-07-18 03:43 PM


few words... but it says a lot!  

Neeraja

Maverick Wolf
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since 1999-11-13
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Scandia, MN
7 posted 2002-07-23 11:53 PM


This is really a wonderful thought provoking piece. Those dreams that we can  actually grasp ahold of are those that truely affect us in our lives.  Keep looking, keep reaching.
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