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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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from the earth conceived from the earth condemned as the trash is neatly crushed BONES into a hymn swing low sweet char – i – ot coming for to dig me a home swing low sweet char-I-ot coming for to dig me a home my bones support the load yet brittle from the birth the womb give not a chance for me - yea not the dying earth |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cool |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow Walt..this is very different for you. I really am glad you are taking classes you know. You've stretched your poetic muscles a lot this year.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's really cool to try on these different voices isn't it walt??? keep going. . . I'm liking the trip. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hey, Walt, I agree with the comment about stretching your poetic muscles. This sounds very contemplative and like a person on the high side of 50, of which I can relate. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i get big smiles from your replies he found me so quickly |
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