navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » I Have Hands
Open Poetry #21
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Have Hands Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2002-07-17 07:32 PM



Limbs have hands
when armed with digits
taller secrets
higher than midgets
hands off approach as trust is duped
hands on method, practicality is induced
armed with fingers, dressed in rings
equiped for sign language, ask for things...
extended for that body language take...
handshake for two freshly introduced,
a callous preliminary, rude mistake
or with adjusted denture
welcomed venture.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-17-2002 10:27 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
1 posted 2002-07-17 08:51 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Martin, this so very true, sweet friend, we all have hands and without them we can never fully reach anywhere in the realms of imagination and innovation and relate! (sigh) This is agnificent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-07-17 09:10 PM


And a big hand for this great poem, Martin.

hugs of applause

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-17 09:14 PM


Your poems are always good.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-07-17 09:42 PM


Always so interesting the way you think and the style of your writes. Brilliant. ThisDiamond
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
5 posted 2002-07-17 10:28 PM


Thankyou all for your poetic applause


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #21 » I Have Hands

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary