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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-17 07:11 PM



You hide you life
In shadows.
Darkened ones with
the creatures crawling on the walls.
You inner beast is released.

I don't know
What you do,
When you lock
yourself in your room.
I bet you cry.
You always lie...
so i guess
I'll never know.

You seal your heart
with metal,
You were so afraid to love,
Now that you've found it you won't tell.
But I can tell.

I don't know
What you do,
When you lock
yourself in your room.
I bet you cry.
You always lie...
so i guess
I'll never know.


I wish there was something I could do...
But you always push me away.
I wish there was something I could free...
But you would like nothing to do with me.

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

© Copyright 2002 Sara Nicole - All Rights Reserved
Gemini
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1 posted 2002-07-17 08:17 PM


Sometimes its hard to understand why the ones we wish we could reach don't wish to reach us.  Nice write.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-17 09:43 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sara, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you for I know these tears so very much and I too hope soon she can lend you hert trust in you and let you help her and comfort her! (sigh) My heart goes out to you both, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-17 09:49 PM


This is so sad. Enjoyed!

Cold hands means a warm heart

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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4 posted 2002-07-18 11:35 AM


Thanks to all of you;
and Angel...
you must truly be one.

-Sara

If we follow the invisible line of hatred, it will lead us straight to our hearts.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-31 03:22 AM


quite sad
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