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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-17 04:40 PM



For Linda... who broke up with her friend... but needed one more night... before she could let him go...

Stay with me until the morning
just for one more night
keep me in your arms
hold me very tight…

Shut the door of truth
I can’t face it now
not before someone
can explain me how…

Tell me that you love me
please don’t ask me why
and let us both forget
it will be a lie…




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1 posted 2002-07-17 04:52 PM



ah...how we attempt to use the shadows
to hide our pain, always hoping that
tomorrow's light won't shine so
bright...

well done, Neeraja...very well done, indeed...

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2 posted 2002-07-17 07:51 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Neeraja, this is so sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to your friend Linda for I know how hard it must feel to let go of someone you love so much! (sad sigh) I send her my deepest sympathies sweet friend, I know though with all my heart she will find the greatest happiness for she is so deserving of it just like you are, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-07-17 08:01 PM


very well written poem and very emotionsl subject - your poem misses none of the power of this situation - Paul
Gemini
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4 posted 2002-07-17 08:22 PM


The first days are so difficult, give it lots of time, like forever.  Lovely write.
Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-07-19 02:36 PM


Thank you sweet people for your support!


                

Neeraja

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