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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Slow man's land... One does not rush when the sun of southern desert burns through summer sky such that even dust coughs and wheezes with effort under the wheels of passing nomadic trailer This is slow man's land a place where speed kills and the slow survive by conserving energy and hiding from the blinding daytime It is not lazy behavior to contemplate before moving to consider before acting when the fires of all hell burn under your feet and each step could be the first of the last or the last of the first you ever take I remember those places when I talk with you... and with parched throat try to answer your questions |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You don't know how slowly I strolled through this ...and how sad I was to come to the end |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron A nomad's trailer..the perfect example of slow man's land. You painted him well...and then personalized with that end touch. Enjoyed! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Fantastic writing! Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and each step could be the first of the last or the last of the first you ever take mind if I smooch ya back? (There I go again, with those infernal QUESTIONS!!!) I read this through a sepia lens of eye. Beautiful. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A nice "Raw Sienna" kind of picture. Sec ~wranx I have great faith in Humanity...It's just most of the Humans, I'm not too keen on. E.F.Rose |
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