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0 posted 2002-07-17 02:03 PM



Consciousness of Corridors

Into a hall of ladders
Ascending levels of dimension
Degrees of dream instill
Inclined presence

Piercing exquisite instant
Reveries temperament onset
Slackened abandon
Assuaging layers' lair

Astounding labyrinth
Surrounding quelling omni
Ocular screens fade
With
wake
up

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1 posted 2002-07-17 02:03 PM


Very interesting

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2 posted 2002-07-17 02:59 PM




(smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, life is indeed a series of corridors and each time we turn a corner there is always multiple crossings! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-19 07:57 PM


my dreams literally feel like this sometimes
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